Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Accident ~ a haiku

Today's muse: Daily Writing Practice

It's Two Haiku Tuesday at DWP. Today's prompt: Accidents.

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some say accident
but you, my lovely daughter
were a nice surprise


a mistake you say
yet you continue to strike
sorry’s not enough

1 comment:

Heather said...

I read these a while ago and needed time to think them through. I really enjoy the first. A little bit of personal meaning.

The second one leaves me with mixed feelings. I think that is good. It makes me wonder more about the people involved and the situation. Not really the point of a haiku, but a great piece of writing!