Thursday, October 29, 2009

Suburban Warfare



Today's muse: Daily Writing Practice

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Suburban Warfare

Birds trill well wishes to one another, leaves rustle as they tumble down the street—a Saturday morning symphony. It is a peaceful prelude to the battle that will soon begin.

The atmosphere shifts as warriors begin to gather at the battleground. Each one is filled with anticipation, charging the air with energy. They appear in twos and threes—some arrive alone.

The difference in class is apparent: those with means are outfitted with the best protection; some wear second-hand pieces, weathered by countless others in this age-old dance; a few wear nothing but the simple clothes they own, prepared to risk flesh and bone.

But it is not about the gear or the equipment; it is not about wealth. This ancient tradition transcends all classes, all ages, all boundaries. Singing to the passionate spirit, it equalizes the masses to build a cohesive unit and forge alliances that will survive evermore.

As the bright orange ball is dropped and L-shaped sticks slap in combat, a young voice peals the battle cry:

“Game on!”

And the war begins.



7 comments:

Dan Felstead said...

Another great piece of writing Monica. Are you published?

Dan

Monica Manning said...

Dan Felstead: Sadly, I am not ... but that is the dream. From your lips to God's ears, my friend.

lady fairchilde said...

Great piece - you have captured the essence our national pastime exquisitely!

"Caaaaaaaaaar!"

Jeanne said...

Lovely -- "rustle" and "tumble", "peaceful prelude to battle." I can hear the young voices and the slap of the stick.

Wine and Words said...

Frick Monica! Why are the best things I read on blogs? Why are the extraordinary writers toiling away at their passions for comments, while multitudes of pathetic prose are posing as literary getting a paycheck? Frick!

Monica Manning said...

Frick, indeed W&W. Frick, indeed.

Sarahlah said...

Excellent piece of writing. I enjoyed it thoroughly.