Thursday, September 10, 2009

Nine, Nine, Nein

Today's muse: Daily Writing Practice

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Nine, Nine, Nein

We promised
Many years
I gave:

Never again,
you said.
Another chance,
you begged.
I gave:

Pictures they
asked me.
Proving what
they see.
I gave:

Charges have
been laid
Mercy’s all
you prayed.
I gave:


glnroz said...

There is a mystery here to which, i still look for the clues.

glnroz said...

this was a compliment, :)

Monica Manning said...

@glnroz: ;O)

Wine and Words said...

Sehr gut! Loved the play on the word. Hoping it's not true, but surmising it is...heavy with sorrow, things taken, not returned.

::She Poet:: said...

I suspect as well there is some personal reflection entwined here. This is what makes poetry powerful, the emotion behind the prose. The tone is solemn and I too love the word play, hence, "Nine, Nine, Nein". The last stanza really slapped me across the face, had to read it again.