Monica...this is begging to be set to music...reminds of the lyrics of Jewel. Very nice.Dan
Thanks, Dan. Your comments always boost my ego.
I'll let you in on a little secret Ms. Manning. My husband has not slept (as in sleep, not as in sex) with me in probably five years. Says he is more comfortable on the couch where he is rooted down in the pillows and cannot toss and turn. Even in our togetherness, I am alone...Big bed, little comfort.
The next time you tell me you have writer's block I won't listen. This is beautiful and I can really feel the loneliness and empty feeling in your poem. Btw, love the profile pic. Are you Crazy Mo? Those Voices in My Head? Is that you???
YAY! Simply gorgeous dahling.
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