Today's muse: Succinctly Yours by Grandma's Goulash
The rules: Using the picture and/or word (the word is optional), write a story under 140 characters OR 140 words.
Today's word: Pugnacious. Though I didn't use the word, it's implied.
Today's photo:
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Like Fire
Love once burned white hot, their passion a Dali canvas. A decade later, it burns with fury, and their voices scream with the sirens.
12 comments:
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Love turned to frustration, the fire remained. Very interesting, the way you implied the word pugnacious.
This is clever. nice one.
very nice,,,Ms. Manning,,,the writing,, the other,, maybe i don't like so much. :))
So who's that guy trying to dampen their passion?
At least it hasn't fizzled from indifference. This is very well written.
Lovely image and poetic, too!
Nice imagery, and a very creative take on the photo.
Thanks, Larry. I'll swing by and read yours soon.
Seasons: Fire isn't always good. Sometimes it burns.
Thanks, Anthonynorth.
glnroz: yeah. me neither. but sometimes it goes with the territory. or so i'm told.
Pat: I think they hope he'll put out the anger.
Grandma: Well said. Indifference is much worse.
Thanks, storytreasury!
Thanks, LRC. It was the first thing I thought of.
I loved your entry. It was almost poetic and certainly full of fire (and water to quench it).
Thanks so much for the visits. Take care and God bless.
Nice, Monica ~~ Sirens and fire hoses, too hot.
I like Dali. Of the Surrealist artists Peter Max is my favorite contemporary.
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I guess all that water is making it more steamy!
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