Oh Oh slipping away from me......
Lately, you walk ahead, leaving me behind, seldom looking back. I can’t laugh anymore; you don’t care enough to listen. Brilliant.
^ I'm with Deborah, that's my favourite bit :)
How come? ms. Mannning,,
Sad yet beautiful:-)
Truly beautiful. It manages to touch the sadness nerve. Brilliant poem.
There are universal signs of things slipping by aren't they..it all tends to go down hill once you take your hands out of each others jeans pockets..I still hope they re-join fingers..Jae
A very real write. Honest voice. Enjoyed much.http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/unexpected.html
I agree. This definitely feels real and honest. Very sad.
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