Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Powdered Addiction ~ a haiku

Today's muse: Daily Writing Practice

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Powdered Addiction

reddened amber eyes
watch as white lines disappear
blinded by false joy

1 comment:

~She Poet~ said...

Monica, thanks for stopping by :) I appreciate it. Your Haiku is bold and creative. The last line is poignant to the title. Any addiction is false joy, a sense of false existence albeit temporary. As far as the Haibun, good luck with that one girl! I read the rules and my eyes glazed over. I'd be interested to see what you come up with. Great job!