reddened amber eyes watch as white lines disappear blinded by false joy
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Monica, thanks for stopping by :) I appreciate it. Your Haiku is bold and creative. The last line is poignant to the title. Any addiction is false joy, a sense of false existence albeit temporary. As far as the Haibun, good luck with that one girl! I read the rules and my eyes glazed over. I'd be interested to see what you come up with. Great job!
1 comment:
Monica, thanks for stopping by :) I appreciate it. Your Haiku is bold and creative. The last line is poignant to the title. Any addiction is false joy, a sense of false existence albeit temporary. As far as the Haibun, good luck with that one girl! I read the rules and my eyes glazed over. I'd be interested to see what you come up with. Great job!
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