Hi Monica - Nice! I read and re-read several times. The imagery and flow are terrific.
Succint and powerfully written.
Yes, all seems lost when the life in your eyes disappears..scarier than any wound or trickle of blood..Jae
...this is another one of those,,,
Creepy ... I love it! :D
@LRC: Thanks! And kudos to you on your publication with Chicken Soup for the Soul! @Deborah: Thanks, Deborah. It was difficult to stay within the 4-line limit that Marc set. @jaerose: Scarier, indeed!@glnroz: Just making sure you keep reading!@Spook: Thanks, Spook! You're so sweet!
I've worn these eyes for months. Scary when the blood oozes out, like Ebola gone viral. Necessary though. I'm oozing.
Powerful. Sad. Scary.Good stuff, overall.
Ah, the dreaded hollow eyes!
@W&W: I am saddened that you understand. No one should ooze. @Rob-Bear: It is sad and scary for many. @Dave King: Indeed!
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Hi Monica - Nice! I read and re-read several times. The imagery and flow are terrific.
Succint and powerfully written.
Yes, all seems lost when the life in your eyes disappears..scarier than any wound or trickle of blood..Jae
...this is another one of those,,,
Creepy ... I love it! :D
@LRC: Thanks! And kudos to you on your publication with Chicken Soup for the Soul!
@Deborah: Thanks, Deborah. It was difficult to stay within the 4-line limit that Marc set.
@jaerose: Scarier, indeed!
@glnroz: Just making sure you keep reading!
@Spook: Thanks, Spook! You're so sweet!
I've worn these eyes for months. Scary when the blood oozes out, like Ebola gone viral. Necessary though. I'm oozing.
Powerful. Sad. Scary.
Good stuff, overall.
Ah, the dreaded hollow eyes!
@W&W: I am saddened that you understand. No one should ooze.
@Rob-Bear: It is sad and scary for many.
@Dave King: Indeed!
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