Today's muse:
One Word, So Little TimeToday's word: Reports
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Reports His last letter was so joyful, filled with anticipation, sheer excitement to hold the child he’d yet to meet; but the paper she held in her hand—that trembled in her grief—confirmed he never would.
4 comments:
Oooer, ominous!
I was unable to comment here yesterday. perhaps tomorrow,,this is the sharpest yet...(compliment)
I see a young woman, bedraggled by lack of sleep, standing in a blue flowered night gown, her head hung low, and crying on her doorstep.
How is it that you can invoke such imagery with so few lines?
Yes, a very strong piece - and unusual perspective..almost makes it stronger wondering how the mother feels too..Jae
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