tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post8128568046227432105..comments2023-07-16T06:12:14.889-04:00Comments on Monica Manning: School GirlMonica Manninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15261586665831377609noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post-64876668339477327372011-01-12T09:55:41.899-05:002011-01-12T09:55:41.899-05:00as always a delightful "spin".as always a delightful "spin".glnrozhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12922837344762102334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post-28685693472679072132011-01-11T16:56:19.576-05:002011-01-11T16:56:19.576-05:00Wooo ... Brilliantly done, I loved it and the endi...Wooo ... Brilliantly done, I loved it and the ending was just PERFECT!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post-710144306824508452011-01-11T09:24:56.805-05:002011-01-11T09:24:56.805-05:00OK, first, the ending hit and hit hard. Such a gre...OK, first, the ending hit and hit hard. Such a great twist. But this line: "Need coiled through her, bringing a flush to her cheeks." Brilliant. You've stripped everything down, but leave us with a richness of storytelling.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post-25066881623815127722011-01-08T11:53:01.216-05:002011-01-08T11:53:01.216-05:00Didn't see that coming. Maybe this time she&#...Didn't see that coming. Maybe this time she'll get caught!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post-98594255775181482011-01-08T09:37:10.782-05:002011-01-08T09:37:10.782-05:00Ooh, you sucker-punched us (again!)..Fantastic sto...Ooh, you sucker-punched us (again!)..Fantastic story..totally engaging and you completely lured me into all the traps..also made me think about Rhonda too..thank you for visiting..corking piece! JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-277557655004484016.post-65795531413426545122011-01-08T07:34:07.896-05:002011-01-08T07:34:07.896-05:00Whoa! I did NOT expect that last bit ... oh my god...Whoa! I did NOT expect that last bit ... oh my god that gave me the jitters! Brilliant work!Charley Robsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09542608515324640174noreply@blogger.com